I had a group crit with Patrick, Aggie and Olivia. We spoke about both our PPP and Extended Practice projects. In regards to my PPP we talked about my business cards. The card one the left shows my old information. Before the crit I recently changed the information (right image) because it wasn't correct and up to date and spaced the lettering out more as I find it a bit unclear to read. I showed Patrick and he thought the information is still far to small. I take up too much space with my name and make the important contact info too small. Although my play on my last name 'Hollings...worth talking to' was clever, it's more important that the info is clear. Because of this, I think it's best that I re-do my business card. I want the design to be able to work across all my media platforms, including my website. I'll have a play around with some designs.
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